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The story behind the book
Thank you Dee-Marie for asking for an article from me on the steps it
took me to create my children's picture book.

So here is the story behind the writing of that children's picture book.

 

 

The idea of depicting a virtual enchanted garden was at the back of my mind for a long time. 

I wanted to make an image in which I can depict a virtual enchanted garden, where people work together in cyberspace. The image would have to express the visual workplace, the connectedness of the people in that place and finally the fact that in that space each person actually creates his/her works alone. I mean that on a final piece of work made in that place, one can see the individual mark of each artist.

When I discovered Rosity, I knew this is the place where I can get all the inspiration in order to depict that garden. But it seemed to me that Rosity is too large for depicting an intimate fun virtual garden. I mean it was hard for me to describe a place that has hundreds of thousands members... as an intimate place.

There are several virtual artistic communities out there which I adore... [Although I call only Rosity as my virtual artistic home..] and one of those virtual communities that excites me is RDNA. Especially I like the way of product development thinking of its leader Syyd and her partners, and am in love with all those greeneries creators -- Judith and her partner Chris. 

Of course I became very happy when I found out that there is a challenge that celebrates the RDNA staff. That challenge gave me the opportunity to create an image that describes the essence of small virtual team working. The time for the deadline was very little -- so I decided that I will show just two persons from RDNA, and I chose Syyd and Rena. I described Syyd when she is 'doing that morphing thing' -- that is metaphorically speaking she is sculpturing. And I described Rena in a special moment when she gets inspiration to paint something. I put both of them into an 'enchanted virtual garden in the cyberspace'. 

I chose Rena to put into that image... because for me Rena represents the best dress texturer at the virtual world. I adore her works from the very first time I saw them in a given site. And wherever she went to sell her adorable textures I followed her... and although I didn't buy all of her works... I adored all of them. 

I entered the finished image into the RDNA Staff Challenge and it has received a placement and just after some minutes I got the announcement... I spend all my prize money on the site :).

Several days later I put that image into my Rosity gallery... and as I saw there Rena's comment on that image that said: 'A beautifully captured metaphor and a very inspiring render to tell your story! :) I admit that I was a bit shocked to find out you think of me as "bald" but art is art and who am I to object? LOL'... I knew I have to ask Rena about her process of digital texturing... and if she will answer I have a book. 

Yes, I remember as I saw Rena's comment, I knew that I can extend that image into a picture book. I was very lucky. Rena agreed to answer to all my questions. She had tremendous patient, and answered and explained... and answered and explained once again. We were using Rosity IMs... and IM-ing back and for... several days. When I felt I have enough information about her way of work, I made the storyline for my book. Then I started develop a serials of rough renders -- that fitted the storyline. 

I was determined to make Rena as the heroine of that book. I named her Lily, and made her as a virtual dress designer... and although 'gave her' a daughter who take part actively at all the little happenings of that book.

After that I created the images, I used to send them to Rena and asked for her opinion, remarks and suggestions... and for a lot of encouragement. Rena gave me a lot encouragement. She gave me also a lot of advices, and I incorporated them into my images. For example on one of the images where I describe how Rena gets her ideas for texturing a cloths... Rena suggested putting there a 'flying dress', and other flying little adornments as they representing those ideas that she has for texturing. 

When I finished the first draft it was time to change the working title of that little book into a final title. At that time... some very nasty things happened among some members of Rosity... and it was going on the open forum, so I could read about it. And I was thinking... not everything is so enchanting at that garden... and I decided to change the title from the 'the virtual enchanted garden' to: 'The Wild Virtual Enchanted Garden'.

After finishing the first draft... I felt that the book is too short to sell it. At that time our daughter was preparing to leave home [she is at the age when children leave home...] and even before she left home, I already started longing for her. Each day I remembered one of two adorable things that we used to do together when she was a little girl.  Rena already 'had a little girl' in that book...after all I realized she was modeled after our daughter, Noa, so I decided to incorporate those shared moments into that book. Before I started to create those images that depict those shared moments, I jot them down in order to lengthen the book, and sent those ideas to one of my lady friends, Crystal, whose opinion I value very much. She liked all of the ideas, and I started to create those extra images... with the corresponding story line.

At that time Firebirdz came out with a new package named:'Pitter Patter' that had adorable PS poses, and I used almost all of them in that book... and those poses definitely speed up my book creation process.

I also posted from time to time in my gallery at Rosity those images that depict those valuable shared moments with my daughter when she was a little girl, and I got a lot of strength to continue to work on that book, from all those wonderful comments that Rosity's member left under my images. I would like to take the opportunity here, and thank all of my Rosity friends for all those encouragements and help. 


Eventually I finished that little book, and sent it out to Romanceworks and Neomea for getting reviews... and I was very happy that they liked that little book. 

And finally I uploaded it to MRP... and it was there. 

 

* this article has been published in:
'Inside the Nov/Dec 2004 Final Issue of The RIM - [Volume 3/Issue 4]' by the title:
Creating My Online Children's Book: by Koty Lapid [bonbonish]

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REVIEWS:

Read what reviewers are saying about 'The Wild Virtual Enchanted Garden


- A wonderful and delightful book! Filled with magic that melts the heart. Bravo!!


Review given for the e-book edition of this book by Nancy Deer With Horns


- This is a very enchanted experience. The graphics are so colorful and depict the story perfectly. An excellent book.


Review given for the e-book edition of this book by Dawn Reber


-"The graphics are so unique and really stunning. Vibrant colors, patterns, and textures, and interesting characters, all combine to make a fascinating graphic experience. I also enjoyed the story very much. I particularly liked the relationship between mother and daughter - how they shared, and how the mom took time out to even play. She involved her daughter in the decisions and they had a goal of selling the virtual clothes. I liked how her friend, Grace, got involved in Lily’s business, and wanted to help her also....."


Review given for the e-book edition of this book by Carol Cavalaris

 

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TEACHERS:

See how you can use This book in the classroom

- Explain that the author was inspired by the real-life experiences of her own daughter

- Ask kids to interview a parent, grandparent, or other relative about their experience on the Internet. Ask kids to write a nonfiction article based on the interview.

- Ask kids to write a fictional story based on their relative's experience on the Internet. Encourage them to invent new characters and subplots.

- Ask the kids what does the title of this book  mean to them?

 

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